Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 1, 2020
Student blog hop
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I like how you said where the ice cream shop was, you said that there was lot's of flavours what flavours were there?. Maybe next time you can add some more detail.
ReplyDeleteHi Mason
ReplyDeleteI like the sound of this new shop because I love ice cream! In fact, I have just eaten a big bowl with chocolate sauce! What ice cream do you like the best? What would be some of the new flavours at this new ice cream shop?
Hi Miss Carney i like your comment thank you for comment
DeleteMy favourite flavour is cookies and cream.
Some of the new flavours would be rainbow chocolate chip and chocolate candy floss.